When I was a junior in high school, a girl from my churchthat her younger is going to move here and finish hs here so that she can get instate tuition at the university in a few years. Said younger sister, lets call her Marissa, is the same age as me. I ended up showing Marissa around introduced her to my friends both at school and at church sheseemed chill at first. Within a week, she stopped showing up. When we asked if everything was okay, she said “i don’t think ill be missing much. These American kids aren’t that serious anyways.” she missed so much school that she becameno different from the kids that sell drugs. We gave her rides to church andstuff and i introduced her to people there. Eventually, whenever people asked her about school she would complain that the people there sucked and said that I wasn’t helping her get around that much. I was confused but i brushed it off. I didn’t hang her much because one, she was never at school, and two, our classes didn’t overlap at all. The Sunday before graduation, I find a bunch of people who I haven’t spoken to in months telling me that they can’t wait to attend my graduation. Me, being all confused, eventually asked how people knew the details about graduation. It turned out Marissa went and told everyone she knew at church, and she said that I also wanted these people there. I hadn’t even spoken to her for maybe two weeks because I was lockedin on exams. I was furious. However, I for whatever reason let it go. Come around to graduation, all these people wanted me to take pictures with them and Marissa so that they could post on online. i never got to take pictures with the people that I grew up with and me and lot of my closet friends missed out on that because of this. I decided to be the bigger person, and still stayed in touch with Marissa and hung out with her over the summer and for about the first month of College. We went to stuff together, but i usually ended up going home alone because she would leave me for the “new friends” she was making. I one day thought it would be nice to make a church group, and Marissa offered to be the VP. Little did I know, she was already talking to people at church to make an outing before we were registered so that she can post on social media about it. When I found out, and asked if said outing could wait for registration to happen, she told me “bro why are being so aggressive its not that big of a deal chill”. And proceeded to not only have said outing, but also post on social media This made the registration process that would have ended in the beginning of October not be finished until the end of January because the university was pissed off. This was when i decided that I was tired of being used. I kept up with this church group thing, but even the rest of them and the advisor and had turned against me. I got tired of asking things and getting no response. I just shut down the group last week. And I just unfollowed everyone on my personal account.
There is no way this was written by a college student
And? What’s your question?
You need help with grammar, sentence structure, paragraphs, and general storytelling.
So this was very hard to read. But by the way it sounds you may be TA. It sounds like you have a hard time if you do not get to do what you want or if someone else goes a different direction than you. I am not saying Marissa is a first class peros. But it seems like she does her thing and you want to control things. I mean you got mad she told people at your church when both of your graduation was. You are mad that she organized a church get together because you didn’t get to do registration. She may be right. Chill it will be good for you. Also please, I don’t know if it was you writing in anger, or English is not your first language or what but slow down and maybe run it though a grammar checker so it is easier to digest.